The Legend of Salty Bob 13 | Dec 18, 07

The Legend of Salty Bob 13 | Dec 18, 07

Jupiter and gang venture into a dark underground cavern. . . the gravesite of Salty Bob!

Awww! And this concludes our lovely underground romp with Jupiter and her pals. Whoo! I hope you’ve had as much fun with them as I have. And believe me, I have. (*grin*)

One thing I’ve noticed about a lot of ghost-mystery/adventures is that everytime the main chars solve the tale and, say, prove there isn’t really a ghost or some such, the story always ends with something spooky “mysteriously” happening, and then everybody looks at each other and end up saying something like “Maybe there is a ghost after all!” or “We’ll never know!” That’s really overdone, I think, and I wanted to come up with something surprising, a ghost-tale-that-isn’t-a-ghost-tale with a real unexpected twist in the end. In this case, a feel-good kind of twist. I hope I’ve succeeded!

Posted on December 18, 2007 at 12:00 am in Jupiter. Follow responses to this post with the comments feed. Comments are closed, but you can trackback from your own site.

3 Responses

  1. Sophie says:

    Well done! I’ve enjoyed this tale with Jupiter and Co. and the end was indeed both a twist and very satisfying.

  2. Lynn Lau says:

    Thanks, Sophie!

  3. Nina Ford says:

    mmm this story definitely showed off their caring nature (: Nicely done. so sweet.