Jupiter and gang venture into a dark underground cavern. . . the gravesite of Salty Bob!
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Awww! And this concludes our lovely underground romp with Jupiter and her pals. Whoo! I hope you’ve had as much fun with them as I have. And believe me, I have. (*grin*)
One thing I’ve noticed about a lot of ghost-mystery/adventures is that everytime the main chars solve the tale and, say, prove there isn’t really a ghost or some such, the story always ends with something spooky “mysteriously” happening, and then everybody looks at each other and end up saying something like “Maybe there is a ghost after all!” or “We’ll never know!” That’s really overdone, I think, and I wanted to come up with something surprising, a ghost-tale-that-isn’t-a-ghost-tale with a real unexpected twist in the end. In this case, a feel-good kind of twist. I hope I’ve succeeded! |








Well done! I’ve enjoyed this tale with Jupiter and Co. and the end was indeed both a twist and very satisfying.
Thanks, Sophie!
mmm this story definitely showed off their caring nature (: Nicely done. so sweet.